ext_121219 ([identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ellie_hell 2011-07-06 08:01 pm (UTC)

Finally had time to read (no cake this time though...)

The first meeting is so perfect! Poor John, being all insecure about Sherlock's motives at first. *wants to hug John*

His mouth was almost intact, but there was a small mark, like a bite in the left corner of his upper lip.
This sounds like the perfect place to drop a kiss onto!

They crossed the Watsons’ grounds and didn’t stop until they were facing Lover’s Island. Was this name mentioned before? Otherwise do I see some foreshadowing here? ;)

Trust John and Sherlock to talk about dead animals and bones on their first date. LOL
It is a very sweet first date though!

The scene with the owl is beautiful!

He didn’t look like John anymore; he was The Beast. A worrying creature. Closed. Inaccessible.
Noooo, why are they fighting? They should be KISSING friends!

Great chapter and perfectly evil cliffhanger!! I love it! :D

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