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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE LOVE!!!

Although small note:

he practically jumped on me before I could even finish to propose!”

Possibly want to say "before I could even finish proposing" or "finish the proposal"?

Also:

He gave him his best smile, and he felt John’s traits loosening as he smiled back.

...not sure what you mean by traits...

...but other than that, loved loved loved this chapter! *spins you around* This story is SO lovely!

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Ellie L.

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