ext_121219 ([identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ellie_hell 2012-03-17 08:09 am (UTC)

Hee, that's a great ending for a wonderful story!
<3

You don't need the 'was' here, I think: At first, their wedding had been the only thing discussed around town, and for a while, neither Sherlock nor John was had been seen by anyone

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